Razpaz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[That one AC from the cover art]

Good job on the detail, and I can see you put a lot of effort on it!!
The shading needs a lot more work tho.
Soft brush color light and shadows look great on soft surfaces, but not so much on mecha. Try studying how hard shapes (cubes, cylinders and pyramids) react to light to different angles... This will help you improve a lot!

Eggboy97 responds:

Hey thanks for the feedback! I'll look into that.

[well... my first sprite of my character]

Mhhh, pretty clean job in terms of sprite, but the outline colors take away from the character.
The glow around the eyes makes the head look overexposed to light. Try to work around amore limited color palette for a more coherent look.

DaATPcosmic responds:

I'll see how I can fix it to make it better, thank you very much

[Spook-Month art piece 2022]

Cute and clean!! Love how the colorful characters stand out against the grey environment!

[DJ]

I love this vintage feel SO MUCH!!! Great work

[Mecha repair]

HOT

[Skeletitan]

Very clean job and nice color palette. My only gripe is that the bottom characters clash way too much with the overall ambient of the scene. the yellow light source should be much more subtle to create a transition from yellow to purple across all the characters.

[vampiric couple 🦇🩸❤]

I really like the choice of colors and general vibe, but overall needs sharper definition to make the character features stand out more and make details more recognizable. Keep doing your best and improving!!!

Z4R4N1K responds:

Tysm!!1 Thank you for your advice, I will take it into account to improve! ^_^

[Gift-🍭Bubblegum Witch🍬]

The coloring is just so good!! Love it

[Motor Saw Person]

Ok this goes HARD!