Razpaz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Comet Hunt]

Rooting for you!!!

Lt-Abdelhak responds:

very appreciated my friend :)

[That one AC from the cover art]

Good job on the detail, and I can see you put a lot of effort on it!!
The shading needs a lot more work tho.
Soft brush color light and shadows look great on soft surfaces, but not so much on mecha. Try studying how hard shapes (cubes, cylinders and pyramids) react to light to different angles... This will help you improve a lot!

Eggboy97 responds:

Hey thanks for the feedback! I'll look into that.

[well... my first sprite of my character]

Mhhh, pretty clean job in terms of sprite, but the outline colors take away from the character.
The glow around the eyes makes the head look overexposed to light. Try to work around amore limited color palette for a more coherent look.

DaATPcosmic responds:

I'll see how I can fix it to make it better, thank you very much

[vampiric couple 🦇🩸❤]

I really like the choice of colors and general vibe, but overall needs sharper definition to make the character features stand out more and make details more recognizable. Keep doing your best and improving!!!

Z4R4N1K responds:

Tysm!!1 Thank you for your advice, I will take it into account to improve! ^_^

[Vu~i jiranti]

Clean but is there something I missed with the hand?

Lt-Abdelhak responds:

ah man its the darn ink from my pen that keeps oozing every minute, yet i still draw with it despite that lol

[Halloween Jorogumo]

Love me some spider ladies

HenLP responds:

But what about lady spiders?

[Unfortunate Discovery]

Looks fucking SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICKKKKKKKKK

Zarbustibal responds:

Thank you :)

[ITS WATCHING YOU]

Lovely colors

Argodeon responds:

Thank you so much!

[Skeleton Warrior]

I would have love to see a bit more green light reflection arount the skull and and a more natural flow to the cape... Otherwise this looks fucking sick

Zarbustibal responds:

Thank you :) Yeah I would do a few things differently if I would paint it again :) The Cape and the eyeglow definitely could use a bit more thoguht ^^